Sunday, September 04, 2005

Blood Innocence

See how pure and untainted
This beauty of devastation
Bold and secure in its descent
As sure and silent as it plummets

See how it falls unafraid
Purest in its fluid motion
It welcomes its end unflinching
Ignorant of the clutches that is eternity

See how it splatters on the ground
All innocence of flight lost
Death and dirt cling to it
Attracted to the scent of fresh kill

Fear compounds threefold
Like hysteria on the verge of insanity
Chains shackle and bind
It senses the greater demon approaching

He comes shadowed by night
A slashing motion of noiseless calm
Guttered screams entrenched in blood
Snowy white blinded by brilliant red

His Gloved hand reaches out
Freely liquid amber flows
Finally, innocence in its purest
A sacrifice for the drop of first blood

See how pure and untainted
This beauty of devastation
Bold and secure in its descent
As sure and silent as it plummets

1 Comments:

Blogger a adhiyatma said...

There's nothing wrong with it. That I believe is the first problem. The images, words are all there, all make sense but there's nothing that grabs my attention, no underlying significance that's highlighted by the words. What is it that you're trying to say or describe?

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